crit feedback
remove 'american made' as i don't need this on the logo, this will make the logo more minimal. however keep it on the clothes, poster and bags.
make the logo more manly its too feminine needs to be more aimed at the TA which is men.
i can do this by making it bolder and stronger, use capitals and maybe san serif typeface. I'm still going to make it by hand as i feel it works with the style of clothing. however if this change doesn't work i feel i may keep this design as its the one i like and i feel it works and isn't too girly. but i will try what my peers have said and compare them and see how it comes out.
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