From the task i have learnt a lot more about blogging and how to improve my blogging. i have found out that you shouldn't always blog in the 1st person and try to disrupted language. however 1st person is ok is your reflecting or blogging on PPP.
Looking back at my blogs i feel could improve my blog a lot more now. i need to be more positive about my work and talk about why it work and that it works.
Looking back at my blogs i feel could improve my blog a lot more now. i need to be more positive about my work and talk about why it work and that it works.
Task 1
OLD
The logo came out better than i thought it would, changing it to
be more manly was a great idea and im glad i made the change. I have made to
logos to company could use both and just switch between both. The main logo is
the one with the trees. This we used on the t-shirts, bags, posters, stickers
and much more. However if it needs to be really small the logo or want to
create a really simple bag design, poster or sticker you could use the
logotype. Both work really well and are really street clothing and modern. i
think this links well with the Target market modern, young and men. The logo is
the type of logo i would see on mens street clothing / t-shirt company so i
think it fits well with the company and image of the company. I'm really happy with this
logo is very versatile and could be used on pretty much anything
and clothing company would use there logo on.
NEW
The logo came out a lot
better and the fist idea, changing it to be manlier was a great idea from the
crit feedback. Creating two logos it means the company owners can switch
between the two, the main logo is the tree one this could be used on the
t-shirts, bags, posters, stickers and much more, however if it need to be made
smaller or they wanted to use a simpler logo they could use the other one
instead. It may need to be used on recipes, t-shirts and more. Both logos work
really well and are looks like street clothing and street art. This links well
with the target market modern, young, men, bold and clear. The logo is a type
of logo you would see on men’s street clothing similar to Obey and Only NY. The
logo is very versatile and could be used on pretty much anything a clothing
company would their logo on.
Task 2
OLD
I continued to play around with the type i found DIN and Helvetica
both looked good so i decided to put them together to see how it looked and it
came out really well. It was modern bold and clear. i put Helvetica in Bold
Oblique as i thought it looked good having different to the straight DIN typeface.
NEW
Continued to play around with the typefaces. Then found DIN and Helvetica
both looked bold and communicated modern, clear and minimal, perfected for a
modern company aimed at men. Then decided to place them together to see how they
looked, the design came out strong, bold, modern and clear similar to some of
the logos from the primary research.
TASK 3
What is the different between the following types of writing?
Describing
Analysing
Evaluating
Contextualising
Theorising
Narrating
OLD
From my feedback in the crit, my first idea for the logo was too
feminine and needed to more manly. As this is the main target audience however
girls could wear the clothes as well.
NEW
From the feedback in the crit my first idea for the logo was too
feminine and need to be manlier. The reason why the work was feminine is
because of the style of writing was script and the flicks made it look more
feminine. The logo needs to be manlier as this is the target audience for the
t-shirts.
Task 4
OLD
crit feedback
Remove 'american made' as i don't need this on the logo, this will
make the logo more minimal. however keep it on the clothes, poster and bags.
make the logo more manly its too feminine needs to be more aimed
at the TA which is men.
i can do this by making it bolder and stronger, use capitals and
maybe san serif typeface. I'm still going to make it by hand as i feel it works
with the style of clothing. however if this change doesn't work i feel i may
keep this design as its the one i like and i feel it works and isn't too girly.
but i will try what my peers have said and compare them and see how it comes
out.
NEW
Remove ‘American made’ as this does not need to be a part of the
logo, this makes the logo look unprofessional and busy and could take the
costumers eye anyway from logo. However keep ‘American made’ on the posters,
clothes and bags, as this is a selling point for the company.
The logo needs to be manlier as its too feminine. The reason why
the work was feminine is because of the style of writing was script and the
flicks made it look more feminine. The logo needs to be manlier as this is the
target audience for the t-shirts.
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