OUDG403 studio brief 01- Peers Feed back

In a group we did a peer crit I got some good feed back on how to take forward and develop my typefaces. We used did  different techniques to crit are work first we talked about each image and how it worked or didn't and also talked about how to develop it, we then put a star against the ones we liked and a unhappy face next to ones we didn't like or ones we felt like didn't work.

• Use primary colours if i'm going to use colour, because primary colours are bold and lively which represent active. 
• Try using sports equipment to create the letters. 
• create letter in sport equipment and try and recreate the texture of the equipment. 
• create letters using half and half sport equipment. e.g. a letter 'O' half tennis ball half football. 
• Make the letters in to arms and legs. 
• make the font look like its moving more. 
• Change Futura more. 
• Add some shading to the angled 'F' i created or try it in a word. 
• maybe create a Hospital heart beat to represent active,being alive and healthy. 

From my Peer crit i'm going to create some more ideas and also develop some of my typefaces from the feed back I got.