Final crit comments
Positive comments
- Clear layout
- Easy to follow
- Clear diagram
- Good colour scheme
- Good Production binding
- Minimal
- Legible
I was really happy to see these comment as it most of the
things I was happy about my own book and also the parts I worked hard on, like the
layout, easy to follow and the legibility, and also the binding method. So I was
happy to see them comments.
Negative comment
- Needs glossary
- Contact page
- Proof read
- Not sure on glossy cover
- Water proof stock
- Water proof sleeve
I was happy to see these comments as well they were many
things I have thought of my self and would change if I made this book again.
Needs glossary
Defiantly could do with a glossary to help beginners in
fishing to understand the terminology, however I think most people in fishing
would understand it.
Proof read
I did proof read my work and checked it all but however I
must of miss spell to words and did notice it.
Glossy cover
I chose to do the glossy cover as it flexible and you could
take to the lake and put it in your fishing bag and if it got a bit dirty you
could clean it, however I do understand that it probably doesn’t go with the
context of the book, maybe a textured paper would have been better.
Waterproof
Waterproof stock was defiantly an idea I thought of doing
and if I did have a big budget of this book I would defiantly print it of on
waterproof stock.
Sleeve
A sleeve was another idea I thought of doing but because of
time I didn’t do it. I always like Sagmeister book with the cover and think I would
of looked really good in a sleeve and would also protected it when down the
lake on in your pocket or fishing bag.
The comment my peers made really have helped me and if I had
another week I would defiantly apply these to it.
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